preliminary task progression

Clearly, I have improved my technology skills and now understand how to better the use of a camera . I have a more variety of shots, my mise en scene is made more elaborate and the continuity of my final production is much better.

VARIETY OF SHOTS
In my final production I was able to use a wider range of shots to present my character and expose my environment. This is in contrast to my preliminary task where I had very limited shots and the shots were less clear and precise.

The shots on the right are a close up of her about to plug in the phone, a establishing shot of the area before getting a diiferent shot of the same area but in a different angle; this is different to the left which are images of the preliminary task where we used quite

 minimal types of shots over the shoulder shots and the close up on the footsteps.

 This shot is very interesting because it is an attempted high angle shot which was very unclear and probably unidentifiable, it should have been more higher to make it better. Mistakes like this were not in my final sequence as most of my shots were clear.

MISE EN SCENE 
The mise en scene was definitely much better and has drastically improved from the preliminary task.

This was the closest thing to an establishing shot
in the preliminary task.

On the left are shots from the inside location. The room was suitable decorated for the character and the lighting was dark and grim although still simple. This is different to my preliminary task which had one location throughout and was only convenient  for the limited time. We were even unable to obtain establishing shots of the enviroment.



EDITING 

where the jump cut occurred



The editing in the preliminary task was highly  inadequate however, it was improved in my final  production. In the preliminary task there were many jump cuts and it lacked a smooth run through. However in my final production, I was able to use final cut pro to make my opening look more smooth, embedding the title credits also helped this.